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leather and lace |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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~ lovers forever, face to face my city or mountain stay with me, stay I need you to love me I need you today give to me your leather take from me, my lace ~ ~stevie nicks, leather and lace the problem is stevie’s been singing to me lately I told her I’m strong not in the deep of the night she whispered don‘t you think I see I’ve been there too waiting for a city or mountain that will not be moved to be strong when I am not to take my lace cry when he needs hold me and let me hold him my heart takes me where I should not let me go that’s all if you would just stop singing… she laughs her harsh jingling laugh darlin’ I know you you are a woman true your heart goes where it will flies of its own accord it’s not some silly song about leather and lace that’s bothering you it’s a man |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY interesting 'write'! I especially like: "you are a woman true your heart goes where it will flies of its own accord" Applause! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you poet! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
indeed it is a very interesting write. enjoyed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 I liked the way you made this conversational and I felt a little humor in it, too....I so enjoy reading you, Kate! *hugs*...jo |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ah, I am glad that Stevie just happened to come along to set you straight. God knows, what our lives would be if there was no Stevie Nicks. Actually, I think you could teach her a few life lessons -- and I think your poetry is extraordinary. Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Drauntz you saw that humor jo… isn’t it always about a man?  hugs to you thank you Alison me teach stevie? big big hugs to you!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...I hope you got her autograph while you were talking...no? Then, maybe she got yours. Music can pull the truth from something not admitted to...just as pretty as leather and lace, this poem...and as honest.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
it’s not some silly song about leather and lace that’s bothering you it’s a man LOL... Even before I read your response, I was thinking... Isn't it always? *G* A unique, delightful write... I thoroughly enjoyed! *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heh. Only you...could bring this silly grin to my face. You and your touch. We need to talk. A lot. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*grin*...it always seems to be about a man...I agree...well done...*Big Hugs* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
and on the flip side of the coin . . . women!! But really, like the way you did this - enjoyed the read and must say, the comments too. And Stevie Nicks as long been a favorite of mine...l o o o n g.... j. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Martie I not only got her autograph I‘ve got her voice singing in my head and you’re sooo right about music and the truth thank you so much suthern yup… always LOL Oh Karilea you don’t know how we need to talk a grin and big hugs to you Star thanks thank you j I am sure it’s always women on the flip side thank heavens for stevie huh? |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Milady Kate, Your wisdom and your strength shine through on this one. Your muse certaily led you well. As always, I respect and enjoy your exquisit talent... each one is a stitch in a mental tapestry that I enjoy viewing. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you gentle Sir Moonshadow I knew you would understand about leather and lace you are such a romantic |
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