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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2007-05-03 09:02 PM

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It’s just you
And everyone else
My apologies
To the rest of the world

We live with who we love
Regardless to who’s in bed

Sunlight through the window
Birds feed on the seed
I’ve left outside

Because you said
It does no harm
To be a little kind


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-03 11:09 PM

"It’s just you
And everyone else
My apologies
To the rest of the world".....Dear John, what makes you to write this?

The poem is as good as before. is there a story behind?

have a wonderful night.
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