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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-05-03 05:40 PM


Ghosts

There's no such things as ghosts,
I think you'll all agree
that people who are dead
cannot talk to you or me.

These voices in my head
are surely in my mind
and things I sometimes see
are illusions of a kind.

I'm told it's Devil's play,
and it's really him I hear
and the Devil's found a way,
whilst good souls will not appear.

But the voices usually tell
of the things we should do right,
so the Devil's messengers
must have joined in God's true fight.

Bringing guidance to the lost
and comfort to despair
by establishing a link
to those for whom they care.

These voices in my head
can usually 'kiss and tell'
of things that only you and them
would ever know so well.

But there's no such things as ghosts
you're insane to disagree
and people think your strange
if you talk to them... like me.

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-03 11:01 PM


you sure have showed your strong characters here.
ghost, is somewhere.

enjoyed.

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2007-05-04 12:45 PM


I've read a number of your poems.  I don't always have much time to comment, but I thought I would on this time since you and I seem to have similar experiences.  You seem to be able to write in perfect form of your experiences and what a wonderful gift!
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2007-05-04 09:39 AM


Ivor,
LOL it depends on your definition of Ghost.

Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2007-05-04 09:54 AM


It sure seems that way...Great writing...I enjoyed not only the reading but the subject matter as well...*Big Hugs*
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2007-05-04 10:05 PM


lot of us crazies out here Ivor....me especially.  Kool write me friend...

j.

MindBodySoul
Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196
NJ
6 posted 2007-05-05 12:00 PM


Wow!! ghosts... I've seen them once or twice.. I felt them here and there.. and I always knew they had a message from the all mighty!  

I sometimes see them as guardian angels.. who've stayed behind to guard our souls!

Enjoyed this write
Thanks for sharing!!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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