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Savvy
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since 2007-04-18
Posts 19
Washington State, USA

0 posted 2007-05-03 04:35 PM


Wounded skies bleed,
as the sun sinks beneath the horizon.
Raindrops fall on wilted blades,
of tainted serenity.
Fragile blindness sinks a,
heart tortured in familiarity.
Wind howls from strengless branches humming a symphony,
with a boring breeze.
Subtle pieces of broken dreams,
silences held within.
A hollow attempted a sorrowed,
desperation.
Infinate weakness jaded.
Whims of a scattered beat,
shattered harmony.
Echoes resound a muted trumpet out of tune,
a lonely flower not yet in bloom.

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-03 10:59 PM


"Echoes resound a muted trumpet out of tune,
a lonely flower not yet in bloom."....sadness is well said.

a beautiful poem of sorrow. indeed, it is very nice piece.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2007-05-03 11:45 PM




"tainted serenity"

I know how THAT feels...

I was hoping you were feeling better lovie...but the sad muse can be sublime as well too.

(hope I didn't get any taint on ya! )

Don't make me follow you around and tell bad jokes, now. *grin*

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