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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
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0 posted 2007-05-03 03:47 PM



"My thoughts have been rambarged"
"what did you say to me?"
"its inebreation trying to get to you
and explain what you did to me.
On one hand you bombarded
the fact that you cant compete
with my weapons of mass destruction
so you rush to retreat
Away from me and what i know
about; the fact that you dont,
and will never comprehend what
i saw when i sat down and i broke.
broke down the events that led us
to this behavior here.
bombarding me truthfuly, with
all your words that just wont adhere.
to your alibi where no one knows
from which way you came or you went
and now it seems that your motives,
they're all screwed up and they're bent."
"Now on the other hand i cant
deal with this rampancy.
you're too crazy for me to relieve
all your traits of an infancy.
Childish things of you
lash out from your needs.
to the point that you're so perfect
that it surpasses all means,
of comprehension, i cant comprehend this,
why you would act this way.
guess i have to look back at the past
and how it comes right down to the days
when i wasnt around and it all was filled
with abusive craze.
guess it wasnt your fault but
your eyes dont lie, its what you craved.
the feeling of "let me down"
both disappointment and from your arms.
wanted to be on your own
but disappointed to feel no more harm."

  

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-03 10:55 PM


felt your anger and disappointment. oh,life sometime is not fair.

enjoyed your emotional writing.

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