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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-05-02 10:57 PM



Jen--->MindBodySoul

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-05-03 09:21 AM


WOW! This is just GORGEOUS!

beautiful work! definitely a keeper!

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-05-03 09:23 AM


EXCELLENT!

[fine 'revision']

MUCH applause!

Startime55
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3 posted 2007-05-03 10:02 AM


I felt the first one was wonderful but I love this one even more...BRAVO!!!...*Big Hugs*
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-03 12:30 PM


as beautiful as always.

I hope you happy today!!!

MindBodySoul
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5 posted 2007-05-03 12:40 PM


Happiness comes from within...  This community of poets, brings an unusual combination of calmness & happiness to my heart...    I thank you all for that..


Yes my dearest Drauntz!  I am happy today... I am inspired and I am writing...
  

Jen--->MindBodySoul

LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-05-03 12:51 PM




Bravo!!!!

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-05-03 02:47 PM


Your gorgeous post has just cleansed and revitalized my own mind, body, & spirit!!! Thank you! I needed that!

Love & Light,

EA

Margherita
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8 posted 2007-05-06 12:24 PM


I'm always attracted by the rain and your poem is simply gorgeous!
And so is the presentation!
Love,
Margherita

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