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Redondo Beach |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Pale pink smeared on pale blue was the dusk at beach of Redondo You and me We hand in hand sat on sand To see the sun shinning on another land While watching a little child Slipping into a soft blanket Of mild waving sea Holding the sweetest smile Which tickled all stars That I was counting with my heart till I saw a pair of nebulae had myself melted for the art Head on your shoulder Listen to the music of sea Over night. By my soul’s holder. 3-1-2006 LA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You transported me there to that time and place and with all those glorious images and emotions. Thanx! I needed that!  Beautiful! Beautiful!  Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I remember Redondo Beach... Not quite your way, but remembered, all the same. Enjoyed this, Drauntz. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
So very lovely is this~ A postcard-canvas painted with lovely words~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I REALLY like this imagery!: "While watching a little child Slipping into a soft blanket Of mild waving sea Holding the sweetest smile Which tickled all stars That I was counting with my heart" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My toes curled with your last line... So very beautiful! *S* |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Filled with romance and imagery that brought the vision to life...Well done...*Big Hugs* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Which tickled all stars That I was counting with my heart" love Redondo Beach love this picture of it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Like an excursion into dreamland, truly fascinating. Love, Margherita |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
beautiful imagery |
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