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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-05-02 09:31 AM



~ Loves Touch ~


Loves touch
lingers behind
unseen, though yet, remains
immortalized in memory.
If this were all that I could ever have
even still, with each breath then drawn
I'd rather it be so
than to not know
loves touch.




{thank you, for the inspiration, Sir Moonshadow...}

I've seen the paintings in the air
brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-05-02 09:34 AM


This 'rictameter' is excellent!

MUCH applause!!

aziza
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2 posted 2007-05-03 02:29 AM


This is beautiful!

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3 posted 2007-05-03 08:28 AM


glad you got inspired!
Startime55
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4 posted 2007-05-03 09:39 AM


Absolutely Beautiful...A magnificent poem that fills the vision with beauty and acceptance...*Big Hugs*
paullallady
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5 posted 2007-05-03 11:45 AM


This is a wonderful poem. To know loves touch, even if that is all we know, it is enough.
The Lady
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6 posted 2007-05-03 03:00 PM




"than to not know
loves touch."

such a sad thought gentle Donna
and such an exquisite work...

hugs...

Sunshine
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7 posted 2007-05-03 05:44 PM


Oh....I know someone who
needs to see this...




Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2007-05-07 08:21 AM


Thank you all for the sweet and kind replies.     Peace....
MoonShadow
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9 posted 2007-05-07 12:27 PM


Beautifully said, G.S. with wonderful style.

                MoonShadow
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iliana
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10 posted 2007-05-08 12:51 PM


Me, too, Donna, me too.  Most wonderfully said!  *hugs*...jo
LeeJ
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11 posted 2007-05-08 09:50 AM


I'm so happy for the incredible inspiration which led you to this marvelous write....simply wonderful writing...
enjoyed....

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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2007-05-09 01:12 PM


Immaculate!
I love it!
1derful!
Write on!
How will you ever top this?

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SmartChick
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13 posted 2007-05-09 02:27 PM


This is beautifully written. I wish I could say the same, but I'm not so sure I would want to feel "Love's Touch", again.
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