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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-05-01 10:01 PM


Resplendent Dreams of Endless Love

Just beyond a languid afternoon
of tarnished hopes and broken promises,
as the sharp, blue-enamel sky
fades in crimson sunset
hung on velvet air
of crinet-clouds and amethyst,
(for one last, lingering moment
  stolen from the vaults of time)
evening falls....
to a spectral moon rising
with enigmatic smile;
and soft, dark shadows singing
plaintive “lost-love” songs
to quick-silver roses,
quiver-dancing the night wind’s tune,
by the beat of a lonely heart
forever chasing elusive, resplendent
   dreams
where endless love lives!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (05-01-2007 10:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-05-01 10:32 PM


"evening falls....
to a spectral moon rising
with enigmatic smile;
and soft, dark shadows singing
plaintive “lost-love” songs"

*sighs*

gentle and romantic!

The Lady
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2 posted 2007-05-02 12:56 PM




"quiver-dancing the night wind’s tune,
by the beat of a lonely heart"

are you speaking to me tonight poet?
you speak so well


ArtSolstice
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3 posted 2007-05-02 08:03 AM


This work breathes the essence of fine poetry. Crystalized images beautifully crafted from deep within. Such a pleasure to read!
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Gaia
4 posted 2007-05-02 08:10 AM


"crinet-clouds and amethyst"

What a gorgeous feathery jeweled touch!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2007-05-02 08:23 AM


secondhanddreampoet
Poetry at its best.

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6 posted 2007-05-20 01:54 AM


This was gorgeous, just gorgeous!!!!!!!!!!
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