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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-05-01 07:00 PM


The spring wind


I happily sing to the bluebird
But he flies away.
I warmly greet the furry bat
But he’s back to the cave
I kindly talk to the grizzly bear
But he goes on his play
I tenderly caress the big cat
But he makes me a prey.

Frog hugs the shady green pond
Caterpillar dreams a world far beyond    

I shall sigh out a silent song
Till next spring
……………..
so long.

PS.
My twin sister will be there
When your fan is on.


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-05-01 07:27 PM


May spring winds forever blow good fortune your way!

Lovely write.


Linda

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2007-05-01 09:31 PM


I like it, but rather say, "Hello."   Unexpectedly, I've had a couple of hours to read lately and have thoroughly enjoyed.  I've read several of yours, enjoying your versatility in styles and theme.  Much enjoyed...

miscellanea

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