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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-05-01 03:20 AM


gray pearl of night sky
beckons midnight hour

muted light plays hide and seek
with tundra and tussocks

and the moon smiles

...

Alison

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-05-01 03:30 AM


And I smile too for the beauty of this little jewel.

And I checked what "tussocks" are and they fit beautifully into your poem I feel.

Your eyes caught beauty and the pen fixed it for others to enjoy.

Deeply enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2007-05-01 03:33 AM


Margherita

You make me smile.

Thank you for looking up what a 'tussock' is and for responding with such kindness.

Hugs
Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2007-05-01 04:15 AM


Thank you for the peace and beauty this brings.

- Owl

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2007-05-02 12:07 PM




your "gray pearl of night sky"
shines on a lovely poem Alison

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
5 posted 2007-05-03 03:12 PM


I picture a swirl of clouds, light and dark ...
and how, in time, everything can be a gift

this has a nice shine to it!

CT

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
6 posted 2007-05-03 03:20 PM


beautiful jewel
hat off.

enjoyed

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