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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218


0 posted 2007-04-30 07:57 PM


Reversing common wisdom,
here's a point of view
which abides by the tides
of changing times:

If you separate your eggs
between several baskets
they will not form a web
to fire the stuff of dreams;
to push ahead despite doubts or fears
or tread the cautious words
of timorous mice some would call men.

Hear, now, this wisdom:
dare put all your eggs in a single basket,
dare dream one dream
dare never to let go the hope
of your dream becoming your reality!

For eggs are eggs: very fragile
and certainly break if dropped.
If you are struck with fear;
if you lose faith in sudden upheavals,
so will your wonderful dream.

Learn wisdom on the day of awakening:
scatter not your efforts –
Lose not this sacred moment to time.

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-01 12:08 PM


nice and interesting.

enjoyed.
I bet they are all good eggs.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2007-05-01 01:26 AM


An interesting philosophical thought well worth putting into practice, as you say in certain circumstances!  I think we all do it sometimes, but either without realising it, or realising it but with guilt, instead of, as you suggest, with recognition, pro-activism and pride!

One could say that life, in a sense, is a gamble - or a series of choices.  And you are saying, take the plunge (and I say, the responsibility too), make the choices and uphold the courage.

Well done!

- Owl

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2007-05-02 09:31 PM


interesting reflection on dream-eggs, and mealy, micey-men; etc....

I am especially fond of:

"Hear, now, this wisdom:
dare put all your eggs in a single basket,
dare dream one dream
dare never to let go the hope
of your dream becoming your reality!"

AND:

"If you are struck with fear;
if you lose faith in sudden upheavals,
so will your wonderful dream."

Applause!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2007-05-03 08:58 PM




I'm with poet..

"Hear, now, this wisdom:
dare put all your eggs in a single basket,
dare dream one dream
dare never to let go the hope
of your dream becoming your reality!"


such wisdom
such poetry

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