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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-04-30 10:47 AM




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To act out of love:

peace particles flood the Earth

transforming all life


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OwlSA
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1 posted 2007-04-30 11:36 AM


Oooh!  I can feel the peace particles pervading my soul and whispering colours into my heart . . . floating on a cloud . . . floating, floating . . . warmly.   Thank you.

- Owl


Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-04-30 12:20 PM


Dear Margherita,
I have been waiting for your new poems, sweet lady. this s beautiful Haiku, right?

the picture...out of words. I love it.

simply  double beauties.

MindBodySoul
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3 posted 2007-04-30 05:55 PM


Wonderful piece!

I enjoyed the tranquility it reflected..

The colors are amazing!

Thank you for sharing...

Jen--->MindBodySoul

miscellanea
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4 posted 2007-04-30 06:07 PM


Margherita,

   It's nice to read your poetry again.  I find it so uplifting and magical.  The picture you chose did an optical trick with my eyes.  The more I stared at it, the more the stars, or energized particles, seemed to move, thus illustrating your poem exquisitely!  Thanks for the special moment.

miscellanea

Robert Jordan
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5 posted 2007-05-01 08:51 AM


Margherita,

This is a fine little haiku, nice solar flare too.

Bobby

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6 posted 2007-05-01 09:03 AM


Margherita~

Just a perfect little Senryu ... your talent is showing my friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2007-05-01 09:33 AM


Margherita...Short sweet and with a hopeful message. Enjoyed...Paul

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Paul

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8 posted 2007-05-01 11:24 AM


It's simple beauty
Which reaches deep in my soul
And moves me deeply.

....

Hugs & Love
A

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9 posted 2007-05-01 01:15 PM


And may peace and love be with you always, contessa poetessa.

Love & Light 'n a great big hug!

Linda

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10 posted 2007-05-01 01:52 PM


It would be a way to stop all evil doers, wouldn't it...zap em with a light of love....wonderful and beautiful write...

You give one hope....
Love to you

Lee J.

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11 posted 2007-05-01 03:07 PM


WOW, a picture and some simple words really say everything.

Well done

Jim

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TerryW
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12 posted 2007-05-01 03:46 PM


Simple, yet powerful!

I love it!

My new thought for today!

~Terry

The Lady
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13 posted 2007-05-02 12:42 PM




you just keep taking my breath away Margherita...

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14 posted 2007-05-02 09:02 PM


grand-fine imagery!:
[both the photo. and the Senryu!]

MUCH applause!!

[most ssuredly, this sad, 'ol world could  
   use a few million tons of those
    'peace particles'!!]

Margherita
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15 posted 2007-05-03 07:35 PM


Thank you all for reading and commenting so kindly.

BE peace particles!

Love,
Margherita

iliana
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16 posted 2007-05-04 01:31 AM


Yes!!!  It is happening!  *hugs*...jo
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17 posted 2007-05-04 10:58 AM


Dear Margherita...should each particle be filled with peace, imagine the beauty!!  I think you did.  
Margherita
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18 posted 2007-05-06 11:39 AM


Thank you also dear Jo and dear Martie.
In believing in peace we can manifest it.


Let us live in peace

enriching each other’s self

by diversities


Love and peace hugs.
Margherita



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19 posted 2007-07-06 03:21 AM




(does happy altruistic gesture dance) Oh Margherita, I absolutely agree with a fellow poet earlier in the comments that the picture complements your wondrous senryu so wonderfully in that it shows just how those simple gestures and little wonders can indeed coruscate and lighten the world up richer with love, yay! (angel friendship hugs) I love this, sweet friend, bless you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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20 posted 2007-07-06 03:27 AM


Your amazing Margherita, I have visions of this, as well as others, no way to capture and save it, thankyou so much for sharing this.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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21 posted 2007-07-06 07:08 AM


Nice...James
Sekishu
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22 posted 2007-09-20 04:06 PM


Short, sweet, and a wonderful message.
I love the picture as well.

JamesMichael
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23 posted 2017-03-30 05:36 PM


Miss you and your beautiful words Margherita...James
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