The Coming Dawn (a requested scribble)

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Open Poetry #40

The Coming Dawn (a requested scribble)

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2007-04-29 01:44 PM

What are the pictures in your eyes
My lady in white
As you stand alone
Motionless
Gazinig out to sea
Your long hair, long gown
Blowing, flowing around you
Is it the life you wish
Appearing like a ship on the horizon
To rescue the maiden in distress
Or simply the life you've twice led
A memory reflecting like the sunset
In your eyes
As the evening hours approach
To plunge you headling
Into the waiting darkness
Walk along your path, fair spirit
Away from the gloom
Float along the sand
Tarry not with your burden
Make it through the night
To greet once again
The coming dawn

What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?.
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2007-04-29 09:58 PM

beautiful

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-29 11:30 PM

wow, this is a truly beautiful one.

thank you for sharing.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-04-30 10:36 AM

... away from the gloom ...

Yes, there is always the certainty of the coming dawn. It might be tough to resist, but the reward is golden.

Very beautiful!

Love,
margherita

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