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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-04-29 11:57 AM


Rewrite:


Tilting Scales

On a divvy frisky scale of schemes
Blind justice feeds and weighs my dreams
In joys of wiles that I can reap
I kiss her cheeks in tender sweep

She knows fair well the things I do
The love and mischief that I brew
The kingdoms that I rave in swear
My only love this maiden fair

She smiles in Braille my tilt of scale
And laughs inside my lusty sail
She favors me a willow weep
Serendipity of my sweep

She loves the gestures of amour
The coup of lover’s magic store
The fire and the brand it stands
That procreates this eath and land

So I tilt the scale with many wiles
And she answers, with  many smiles



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1 posted 2007-04-29 04:34 PM


Seymour~
And you, dear poet, tip the scales in poetic perfection~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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jwesley
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2 posted 2007-04-29 05:13 PM


Great piece my friend...

j.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2007-04-29 05:35 PM


Marge,
Huglets back.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-04-29 05:37 PM


jwesley
Thank you for the nice comment.

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-30 03:52 AM


sir, this is a beautiful poem of enjoying being loved. very, very sweet. what a happy mood.

enjoyed as always.

have a wonderful day, sir Tabin.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-04-30 10:07 AM


Drauntz
It is a wonderful day and I will enjoy it.

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7 posted 2007-04-30 02:08 PM


She knows fair well the things I do
The love and mischief that I brew

And loves you all the more for it. *S* Give your lady a big hug for me, will you? *S*

Beautiful work!!

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-04-30 02:52 PM


suthern
I'll do that.

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