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Could there be a better way?
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Could there be a better way? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Could there be a better way to begin a new day? Imagine yourself sliding into a slip of divine time, captured within serendipitous rhyme, bathing in sweet soft shafts of sunlight, wakening from some deep-time sleep hearing soft cascading coos from a nearby mourning dove; stretching nakedly serene alongside the one you love. Could there be a better way to begin a new day? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah...if there is I don't want to find it any time soon my friend...because even if it's 'better', it certainly will not be the 'best'! j. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok so the last part is how i just woke up  there is no better way, at least not for me! enjoyed this very much...good morning!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welp...I don't think there is love to read you Kacy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jimmy, Susan, Dixie... thank you for sharing your soft smiles this morning! |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
That is mostly a fantasy for me right now, but I will take your word for it. Thought for the moment I must eat what I am served ... Holding Midnitesun in my dreams. Hey Kacy, do you still have Live Messenger? I only know how to talk with "Katrina." Are there best days or times to reach you? |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful poem. very romantic. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I particularly love: ".....a slip of divine time, captured within serendipitous rhyme, bathing in sweet soft shafts of sunlight..." Applause! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (04-30-2007 12:36 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahhh ... so serene! Especially if one does not need to get up immediately! Love and Joy. Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I don't think so! I can hear the mourning dove's coos sooooooo clearly. All beautiful. - Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhhh yes Kacy I can imagine that and I can't imagine a better way love this |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I knew there HAD to be a better way than shrill alarm clocks.... If this could be mine, I'd sure become a morning person in a hurry! *S* |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Midnitesun, This is particularly well written. I can’t find anything to complain about. This name "Kacy" rings a bell with me. As I'm an old man, I forget where I met it before. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert Jordan (05-03-2007 10:14 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sure sounds good to me, Kacy! So good to read you!  ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
No, Kacy, I can't think of a better way. Well said! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Imagine yourself sliding into a slip of divine time, captured within serendipitous rhyme, oh yes, Kacy, you dream well... take me with you absolute beauty |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy..to feel the wealth that wrote this poem..no, I think there's not a better way. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
From the depths of my heart, I thank you each for taking time to read and comment. ALWAYS, you make my moments here truly meaningful. |
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