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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Life, lingering upon the budded branch, swaying softly in a dew covered Breeze….hanging by a single solitary thread as a hesitant breath Brings home the whispered words of “I Care”. And, it is known, felt, sensed, tasted upon the tip of a rose colored Tongue…that indeed one does care…and the silence of a whisper, Falling quietly, falling slowly into the shimmering seas.. Does Awaken the heart as one grieves and prays, wishes that one day a Tender soul will again be met … that a hand might reach out and Grasp another who will ever, forever be loved… Dedicated...with humility and single wish of hopefulness... |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow, this is beautiful. very beautiful "Life, lingering upon the budded branch, swaying softly in a dew covered Breeze" ...dew covered bressze. ...wow! enjoyed. life is indeed beautiful. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
very very nice my friend...the dedication too... jwesley |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Barry, I think that's the most beautiful thing I have ever read of yours it's my new favorite "Life, lingering upon the budded branch" oh my... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely, heart-felt and ... just 'and' So touching. aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! You sure made my day today Barry hope and wishes...better than anything I can think of right now |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Barry, I really like this, and especially, how you chose to place the emphasis on your words and pauses by ending each line as you did. Beautiful writing filled with budding hope. miscellanea |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that a hand might reach out and Grasp another who will ever, forever be loved… lovely thoughts, good to read you again  M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ You do the whispered words ... I'll always listen~  Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You care so intensely, dear Barry! This is heartwrenchingly beautiful and poignant. Love, Margherita |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
And the sweet, lush scent of honnysuckle ... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
a gesture of kindness is only as simple as its action ... appreciation of beauty and such heart deserves recognition in kind a rose for a rose .... good to read you again! CT |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words tear at the heart strings...A wonderful poem to touch the soul of one who needs the deep caring that you can give...well done, my friend...*Big Hugs* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such beautiful words pour from your heart, my friend... I'm so glad this came back up so I didn't miss it completely. *S* |
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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
man, this hit home very much so. incredible write. simple yet powerful. love it. ~Jamison~ "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You whisper touch those here who are hurting. Well done Barry. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Even in silence, that heart to heart encourages as much as it embraces the sound of "I care". Brought a smile...so many |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such a very sweet write, BJ....not to mention it's one of the most lovely, flowing pieces I read for awhile. I feel you heart in this write. *hugs*...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Couldn't have said it better myself my friend. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry, you are so very heart tender. Your words touch me. |
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