'Spring' (tanka) --- (editied 'repost')

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'Spring' (tanka) --- (editied 'repost')

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-04-27 08:35 PM

Spring tanka
[for a fine friend!]

Sunbeams slowly slip
through the labyrinth of Love
warming Winter hearts
with the healing touch of Spring
when new hope rekindles dreams!

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-27 10:24 PM

very beautiful.

spring....time for good dreams.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2007-04-28 07:12 AM

I don't know who this was written for, but it is beautiful writing~~

M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-04-28 11:23 AM

MyFriend~
This falls softly ... leaving *sighs* in it's gentle wake~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2007-04-28 08:01 PM

Sunbeam's slip and slide
within a splendid Love maze.
Warm hearts snowed under
spring serendipitously,
rejuvenating dreamers!

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