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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-04-27 01:17 AM


Rosy mist of summer shell
Erotic scent of Jezebel
Taunting, teasing sultry sway
Weaving web of shimmered haze
Wrapping, wafting with the breeze
Tantalizing tempting, dancing tease
Rosy mist of summer shell
Erotic scent of Jezebel
Sultry, sensuous illicit dreams
Flying, floating to sights unseen
Laughing, lusty dulcet strains
Inviting arms reach once again
Rosy mist of summer shell
Silken strands of Jezebel
Silver song beckons invitation
Flitting form promises sultry sensation
Until the day breaks with the dawn
In the sigh of darkness, Jezebel is gone
Rosy mist of summer shell
Fleeting memories of Jezebel

--

aziza

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-04-27 11:01 AM


It's been too long awhile since you treated your pip friends with your fine poetry!

Alluring, mystical, and captivating!

When I was a teenager, our church held a Hallowe'en party for the 'young people'. We were to dress in biblical costumes. Can you guess who I went as?!? lol ~ I wasn't always the little 'angel' that I am nowadays!

Enjoyed your poem ~ and thanks for the memories! Good to see you posting again! You're one of my favs!

Lovin' hug,
EA

LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-04-27 12:07 PM


couldn't have said it better then Linda
sensually delicious

The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-04-27 11:08 PM




oh Alison

what a delight!


aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-04-27 11:51 PM


What a wonderful thing to come here tonight and see that three I admire so much on these boards responded with such friendship and kindness.  You all made my night and I thank you for the wonderful welcome back.  There's been a quiet lull lately lving in my head and heart -- but I am always going to return.

Thank you again, EA, Lee and Lovely lady

Alison

divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
5 posted 2007-04-28 12:28 PM


oooo zi!  I love this, it is absolutely gorgeous *hugs tight*  

Sheli

dwgpoet
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since 2007-03-05
Posts 122
FL, USA
6 posted 2007-04-28 02:11 PM



Musically spellbinding.

I usually think,too many adjectives show danger to Nouns.

However, your noun: "Jezebel"
subjects herself to multitudes.

Loved the sound:
(Taunting, teasing)(Weaving web)(Wrapping, wafting with)(Tantalizing tempting, dancing tease)(summer shell ... scent ... Sultry, sensuous illicit)(Flying, floating)(Laughing, lusty dulce)(summer shell
Silken strands of Jezebel)

Thank You, Alison.

copyright dwgpoet 2007

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
7 posted 2007-04-28 04:38 PM


Alison,

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Erotic scent of Jezebel
Rosy mist of summer shell
Laughing, lusty dulcet strains
Flying, floating to sights unseen
Wrapping, wafting with the breeze
Tantalizing tempting, dancing tease

Silken strands of Jezebel
Weaving web of shimmered haze
Taunting, teasing sultry sway
Sultry, sensuous illicit dreams
Laughing, lusty dulcet strains
Inviting arms reach once again

Fleeting memories of Jezebel
Rosy mist of summer shell
Silver song beckons invitation
Flitting form promises sultry sensation
Until the day breaks with the dawn
In the sigh of darkness, Jezebel is gone
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

However you look at it, this is good sensuous poetry, leaving one wishing the sun wouldn't rise....

Ivor

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
8 posted 2007-04-28 04:54 PM


Thank you all for the comments.

Ivor, great edit job there.   I appreciate you a lot.

Sheli, love you, girly girl.

xoxoxo
A

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
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Philadelphia Pa USA
9 posted 2007-04-28 05:11 PM


Aziza,

This is good writing.  Ivor beat me to the punch with his post.

Bobby

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
10 posted 2007-04-29 04:22 PM


Bobby,

Thank you.
I am enjoying reading your words.

Alison

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