navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » Salvation
Open Poetry #40
Post A Reply Post New Topic Salvation Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Meggen
Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 15
St. Paul, Mn

0 posted 2007-04-26 07:05 PM


Nothing finds peace.
It just keeps getting
Redder until the nights
Cease to be.

We catch the
Sleepless plague
And run frantically
Placing a name tag
On everything
And directions
That remind one
To breathe.

Until we fade.
Until the sickness
Overcomes us
And we no longer know
Our names.
Until we can no
Longer read.
Until each letter
Becomes
Garb b bles
Of Not hingei ness.

This is where the
Mad people are left
To curl up in
Hysteria until
They fall into
Themselves
And end.

Megg.

© Copyright 2007 Meggen V. Kramer - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-27 12:58 PM


this is a very powerful poem. It is very emotional.

"This is where the
Mad people are left
To curl up in
Hysteria until
They fall into
Themselves
And end."

it makes me think more.

very good and enjoyed.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-04-27 12:43 PM


your a marvelous writer...deep thought and profound
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » Salvation

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary