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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-04-26 06:39 PM

Tormentors

I suppose that
now I know
how a person
in my past felt,
when I kept disappointing
her over and over again.
Not appreciating
all the agony
I was causing her
as I kept living
as usual
in my own
frustrating
little world.
The wanting.
The not wanting.
The giving.
The taking.
The lack of happiness.
The excess of suffering
and misery that I
rained upon her.
I need a cleansing.
A shower of foregiveness.
Grace, mercy
and compassion.
Please God.
Not the tormentors.

JamesLee
27April
2007

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-26 06:51 PM

beautiful reflection. a life lesson to other.

enjoyed the poem of littel sadness. it is good.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2007-04-26 10:01 PM

.

"Not appreciating
all the agony
I was causing her
as I kept living
as usual
in my own
frustrating
little world.
The wanting.
The not wanting.
The giving.
The taking.
The lack of happiness.
The excess of suffering
and misery that I
rained upon her.
I need a cleansing.
A shower of foregiveness"

And where
as if you deserve it
would you like
to be shot?

.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-04-28 01:58 PM

Effective 'write' (and, rather interesting comment from "Huan Yi"!]

I much enjoyed the 'read'!

carter07
Junior Member

since 2007-04-26

Posts 31

4 posted 2007-04-28 02:18 PM

Love the reflection, love that you're to the point. It's understandble and people can relate to it. Very good!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2007-04-28 02:35 PM

This could sum it up for a lot of I imagine. Tormentors coming? I hope not!!!
Nicely expressed!

miscellanea

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-04-28 08:03 PM

Thank you Drauntz, Huan Yi, seconhanddreampoet, carter and miscellanea
for the nice comments.
Yes the tormentors did come, indeed, and I deserved my consequences...
My ex-wife was happy to participate in the tormenting, commenting that she had killed me off, and I no longer existed...such is the fate of a husband that fails to love his wife...James

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

7 posted 2007-04-29 05:01 AM

A very honest write.

Enjoyed.

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