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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
icebox inspired this with his "Whispering at Vespers". I hope he doesn't mind that this inferior work cites his poem. Past Is Past is a place we never were, future a place we may never see, and now balances on the cusp of fate. And love sometimes comes too late. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. I think it's pretty good. John . |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 Thanks, John.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~and I agree  M |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
you are right. why "And love sometimes comes too late."? one may not realize in early life. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"future a place we may never see," ~ Sad, but true. "and now balances on the cusp of fate." ~ Truly profound. "And love sometimes comes too late." ~ Better late than never!  I'm sure that our dear box of ice will be flattered that his poem inspired this lovely one! Loving hug, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this measures the gaps and implements change powerfully contains the highest prize of love...and knowing it.... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brilliant! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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