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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Whisper I hear you whisper in my sleep floating on the restless darkness tumbling upon itself struggling to get ahead of the light on the edge of my dreams and gone when I reach to catch it “but I'm so hard to handle I'm selfish and I'm sad”…Joni Mitchell |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
!!!!! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Good Helen John |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very emotionally provoking! Wonderful! ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
sounds like a dream i would wake up from with tears in my eyes...nicely expressed..... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Wow!! I loved this! A well thoughout write which gave me goosebumps |
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Meggen Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 15St. Paul, Mn |
good form. good flow. without seeming to try so hard. i like these words. Megg. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nice write, Helen M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always touch  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You remind me of those dreams I don't want to leave... where waking is a reality jolt, greeted with tears. Beautiful work! |
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