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Stephanos
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0 posted 2007-04-25 01:49 AM


A Prayer for Wayward Sons


Correct those wayward sons who stray
Leftward or to right
Those who drift in shadowlands
Those who flaunt the light
Those who strive and go too far
And those who lag behind
Those who doubt all seeing eyes
And inspectors working blind
While exiled they may seem opposed
And far from being kin
Their polarity may yet reveal
A deeper bond of sin
The momentum of a neighbor’s fall
Springs from a native’s side
Through error just as deadly
False humility spawns pride
Still partial truths may nurse a spark
Of Hope somewhere in ashes
A smoking flax that won’t be quenched
Distinct from all the clashes
Which up till now defined them
And announced what they were not
Blackened vessels bumping
Kettle calling to the pot
Clanging like a cymbal
While the world sees nothing shine
Heal them Lord of heresy
And of presuming they’re divine
Correct these wayward sons who stray
From whose eyes our glances flee
For a haunting family likeness
Which reminds so much of me



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-04-25 09:37 AM


Wow
gripping, moving and compelling story which keeps the mind's eye going
an engrossing read

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2007-04-25 11:42 AM


You manage to do this without being judgemental when you include yourself there my sweet brother!

A poet, A pray-er,
A hotsauce maker!

YAY you!

Now give us a kiss!

Startime55
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3 posted 2007-04-25 11:53 AM


Absolutely Magnificent...This poem is done with love and compassion...I love it...*Big Hugs*
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4 posted 2007-04-25 11:57 AM


WOW!  (That goes for your sauce recipe too!)  
and Amen

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