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Startime55
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0 posted 2007-04-24 10:01 PM



Love Lives

Reddened lips well kissed
left dizzy and sweetly dazed
as eyes unfocused
gaze deep into lover’s soul
knowing eternal love lives

Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer
April 24, 2007



© Copyright 2007 Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-04-24 10:14 PM


oh, beautiful. sweet love poem.

INclan
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2 posted 2007-04-25 12:03 PM


Alright then...do I at least get to come up for air???  I so enjoy blury-eyed kisses...but then I wear glasses so they pretty much ALL are.  LOL!  Enjoyed living through this one.  Thanks!

INclan

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Gaia
3 posted 2007-04-25 09:45 AM


Great Love Tanka! hello Karen
LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-04-25 09:54 AM


breath takingly beautiful
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2007-04-25 01:23 PM


Superb response to the 'Love tanka' challenge!

REALLY enjoyed this!

MUCH applause!!

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-04-25 07:53 PM




outstanding Karen

oh those well kissed lips


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7 posted 2007-04-26 07:50 AM


SisterK~

Superb ... softly tantalizing thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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