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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-04-24 06:53 PM



Dear God,

I wish to complain,
for the pain I have had in your name,
as the Master of all
it is really your call
to ensure that our life’s not in vain.

We believe you say “don’t live in sin”
but your actions leave you on a limb,
as example to all
all the things I recall
that you did made pure evil slip in.

Tell why you let my daughter die
tell why you removed my right eye
and to add further pain
just what was your game
when a cataract you then did try.

Oh I nearly forgot you decreed
and with cancer you planted the seed.
Did the piece of my arm
they removed to save harm
give Celestial pleasure indeed.

Thank heaven(?) for my fellow man
who has helped to preserve what I am.
For your every sick deed
to make my pain your creed.
was defeated in no way ‘you’ can.

So really as ‘Master of All’,
I’m complaining that you make the call
to treat all Mankind
in a way that’s not kind
with the things that on us you befall.

I would ask that you soon mend your ways
and listen as everyone prays
for a chance in this life
to be free of strife
and let all of us all see better days.




Dear God,

I worship your name
for helping me bear all the pain.
As the Master of all
it is on you that I call
when I feel that my life is in vain.

Although sometimes, I fall into sin,
it is you who then guides me within
and helps me recall
that there’s goodness in all
if you don’t let the evil slip in.

As my child’s loss made me want to cry,
in the pain as I lost my right eye,
when cancer found me
as they cut it free
it was your love that helped me get by.

And then when I near lost my sight
as a cataract gave cause for fright
with you ever near
I faced all my fear
as you helped the doctor put it right.

Thank Heaven for all of your care
that has helped me, my life to repair.
For whenever I’m sick
or I’m beat with a stick
it is then that I find you are there.

I worship you, Master of All
and will follow wherever you call
as you guide Mankind
from the evil we find
and on us all your blessing befall.

I know I should follow your way
and ask for the strength when I pray
to live good and true
and be more like you
from your pathway I never must stray.

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-24 08:42 PM


oh, what a prayer! touching.

enjoyed.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2007-04-24 08:46 PM


BRAVO!!! It seems we all turn to Him when we are in greatest need...All we have to do is see how He carries us...Wonderful writing...*Big Hugs*
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