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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-04-24 06:29 PM




              Closer Now

Spirits freed from bodies soar.
  
People left to grieve once more.
  
If only there were words to tell,
  
Released at last from earthly spell,
  
Immortal souls will find the way,
  
To care for loved ones everyday.
  
United in a bond so dear,
  
Always caring, ever near.
  
Loving those they left behind,
  
Inspiring thoughts within your mind.
  
So do not think they’ve gone away,

Much closer now they’ll ever stay.

            Ivor G Davies



The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

[This message has been edited by ivordavies (04-25-2007 03:00 AM).]

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-24 08:51 PM


poem of memeory.

"So do not think they’ve gone away,

Much closer now they’ll ever stay."

very true.

beautiful.



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-04-24 08:51 PM


ivordavies
Well done enjoyed the read.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2007-04-24 10:03 PM


Beautifully written...beautifully said...*Big Hugs*
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