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rrrstop
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since 2007-04-21
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Florida

0 posted 2007-04-24 12:35 PM





Awake
to dream, when dreams
asleep are much like toil,
drugged by fools misguided and hurt.
Awake to dream, to ponder beyond clouds,
and beyond rain that falls from clouds
upon the soil, and clods
of dirt. Awake
to dream.


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-04-24 12:48 PM


oh, good dream, bad dream, day/night dream. awake to dream, dream to dream all produce peoms...and good ones.

enjoyed.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2007-04-24 01:49 PM


MW~
Very nicely done ... and the format is very well completed too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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