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fmlbarebackrider2001
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since 2005-11-16
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0 posted 2007-04-23 11:26 PM


Here's a toast to you
Our buddy, our pal, our friend
Its to say that we miss you
Your laugh still echos in our head
Its to say that we love you
Something we should have said a little more
That we'll never forget you
For the joy you brought into our lives
So, here's a toast to you, our friend.

This is actually part of a song that I wrote about a friend who passed away a few weeks ago. The song isn't finished yet but once it is I'll add the rest of it on here.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

© Copyright 2007 Cory - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-23 11:42 PM


what  beautiful and soft poem for a friend!
your friend will hear it.

what a loving heart.
thank you for sharing.


fmlbarebackrider2001
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since 2005-11-16
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West Texas, United States
2 posted 2007-04-25 01:50 AM


Thank you for your kind words.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-04-26 06:30 PM


Nice writing...James
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