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ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-04-23 04:58 PM

Rambling Words

I'm tired of being sensible
when writing words in rhyme,
sometimes I like to rabbit on
with garbage every line.
The meaning that folk get from this
is always new to me,
for there's no purpose in my drift
that I can ever see.

So feel quite free to comment
with critique of all sorts.
Throw me flowers and roses
or point out all my warts.
It doesn't really matter
how you all respond to me,
for this is not the reason
that I'm rambling you see.

I ramble like a blubbering fool
to free words I've not said.
The words that if not written down
would stay within my head.
I throw them out to scatter
so you may collect them all
and see if you make any sense,
the way you see them fall.

So feel quite free to comment
and educate this fool.
Maybe it's you who pick them up
who'll find a golden rule,
to tell me how to mix them
in a really crafty way
that makes them not just rubbish,
but something that’s grand to say.

But till I find the formula
for clearing out my mind,
I’ll write just utter garbage
of the mixed up, mangled kind.
I know it not a masterpiece
or even worth a read,
but hope my words can grow on all
who cultivate my seed!

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-04-23 05:01 PM

Ivor~
Well, I, for one ... greatly enjoyed this comedic little ramble~

Sometimes ... my fingertips splatter my mumbo-jumbo before I can stop them~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

2 posted 2007-04-23 05:19 PM

Marge,

Thanks for gathering the crop, I hope you can make more sense of it than I...

Oh, you've even got me to 'shape up' one of my posts a bit LOL,

have fun,

Ivor

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-23 07:35 PM

very funny, and made me smile.

you write well sir.

enjoyed and write more.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2007-04-24 05:10 AM

Ivor,
I throw your words back, to do with as you please. So far in all I've read you write poetry with ease.
I'll add a pink carnation, a red balloon or two, I'll throw in some pretty violets and send them all to you.

in thanks...martyjo

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