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RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2007-04-23 09:57 AM

A Spring Blouse

Woven thin, and light as air,
as though a breeze
laden with the fragrance of orange blossoms
had slipped through the car window
to fashion my thought
with scent and curves.

RMW

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-04-23 10:04 AM

Well, Sir, it seems nothing obstructed your vision this morning on your way to work! Wonderful and lightly caressed!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2007-04-23 10:11 AM

Hi Bob

You mean it stopped raining up there? What a lovely view of spring your poem tells of.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2007-04-23 10:13 AM

Sunshine and Martie ... Thank you both. Martie, it NEVER stops raining up here.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2007-04-23 12:15 PM

This...

is my goal. I intend on being like that again before my birthday this year...

thank you for the boost, even though you have no clue what I am talking about...

I am printing this out and putting it on my wall to remind me of my goals..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-24 07:38 PM

so very beautiful.

enjoyed very much. a cool drink in a hot day.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

6 posted 2007-04-24 07:41 PM

Thank you Susan and Drauntz. Your remarks refresh. Bob

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2007-04-24 08:37 PM

The vision of these words caress the mind with the beauty of a gentle breeze...Wonderful reading...*Big Hugs*

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-04-25 10:18 AM

this was wonderfully stimulating....both mind and soul

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-04-25 12:16 PM

A fragrant and whisper-soft spring moment in time. May it be with you always.

Linda

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

10 posted 2007-04-25 12:23 PM

Thank you Startime, Lee and Earthangel. Encouragement is always appreciated. Bob

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