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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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0 posted 2007-04-23 03:14 AM



Relationships

The day smiles at your beauty
When you awake and give reason of love,
To the Seasons, flowers and lonely hearts…
What more can a simple man ask for?

But happiness too must occasionally take pause
As you sleep in your own peaceful bliss,
And the simple man ponders and sighs,
While the jealous night secretly watches…

Marcel


  

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2007-04-23 03:38 AM


Good to see you writing again, Marcel.  Well done!  
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-04-25 04:52 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2007-04-25 07:13 PM


Marcel~

'The day smiles at your beauty'

'While the jealous night secretly watches…'


From opening to closing ... and all inbetween ... you weave captivating poetic magic~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-25 07:35 PM


beautiful poem with a simply life philosophy...be contented.

much enjoyed.

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2007-04-25 07:45 PM


simple, effective, fine, pure 'Romanticism'....

very, very nice! (much applause!!)

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