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Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2007-04-22 12:59 PM

I'm not sure if this qualifies as a Rictameter but the ones I have read are so good I thought I would try my hand at it....

DayDreams

Daydreams
about night dreams
with sun shining brightly
transforming to magic star dust
that takes me to a celestial sphere
to weave loves eternal visions
to share with mother earth
and wrap me in
Daydreams

Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2007-04-22 01:01 AM

This is a beautiful poem. It sounds like a rechimeter (sp?) to me. But I am no professional. I wish I had day dreams like that. I do not really dream anymore. Awesome poem!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-04-24 02:15 AM

O, my friend it is so good to read your beautiful poems again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And thank you for your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-24 02:22 AM

very beautiful. truly beautiful.
to eyes, to ears and to soul.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-04-25 04:51 PM

Enjoyed...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-04-25 05:52 PM

very, very fine!

I don't know of any other 'absolute
requirement' beyond the correct syllable
count per line (which you have, I believe)!

much applause!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-04-25 07:50 PM

Hi, Starry One!

"with sun shining brightly
transforming to magic star dust
that takes me to a celestial sphere
to weave loves eternal visions"

~ Celestial magic! Simply divine!

EA

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-04-25 07:57 PM

whatever it is
it's certainly a pretty one

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

8 posted 2007-04-25 09:41 PM

Beautiful! I love it!

`Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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