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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-04-21 09:29 PM


Wanting To Be In Her Heart


As I listen to those special words
from her lips; "I love you",
I'm grateful that love is more
than a sweet flow of words.

Love is the provider of life
and a flow of nourishment
to our hearts.

Love is the falling rain
gently tapping you
on the shoulder.

Love is wanting to be
in her eyes, her embrace,
and in her heart.


JamesLee
21April
2007





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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-04-21 11:26 PM


Applause for this Romantic 'write'!

I especially liked:

"Love is the falling rain
gently tapping you
on the shoulder.

Love is wanting to be
in her eyes, her embrace,
and in her heart."

Enjoyed!!

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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2 posted 2007-04-21 11:57 PM


Love is all those things and you have said it beautifully...Wonderful writing...*Big Hugs*
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2007-04-24 04:01 AM



Love is......?

you have described it so warmly

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-04-24 02:37 PM


very romantic. wonder why i missed this one.
dream is always better worded than reality.

very warm, beautiful.

Margherita
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5 posted 2007-04-30 08:07 AM


Just beautiful, dear James!
Love,
Margherita

Jenna
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6 posted 2007-05-02 09:14 AM


You said it perfectly, fantastic write.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-05-02 09:16 AM


James, you are a man who knows the true meaning of love! ~ and may you love and be loved, forevermore!


Linda

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8 posted 2007-05-03 08:25 PM


This is absolutely beautiful.  And yes you are right...  love is being one with that person!

Thank you for charign such tender words!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

The Lady
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9 posted 2007-05-03 08:59 PM




"Love is the provider of life"
and everything is added to it

wonderfully said James!


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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10 posted 2007-05-04 01:30 AM


"Love is the falling rain
gently tapping you
on the shoulder."

I especially liked this verse, JamesLee.  *hugs*...jo


aziza
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11 posted 2007-05-04 02:21 AM


James

You have a beautiful heart.

A

banished_fairy
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12 posted 2007-05-04 07:42 AM


Beautiful. After the day I have had, knowing that men want love helps ease the ache in my heart. Thank you for those words.
Honeybunch
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13 posted 2007-05-04 07:59 AM


Lovely, James!  It is indeed an honour to be in someone's heart!
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