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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-04-21 03:14 AM



Many Years Ago

Her lips were
knock me out gorgeous
and when I came to
I felt like a Mack truck
had run over my nose.

Without my friend Leroy
there to help me
I would have suffered
more I suppose.

JamesLee
21April
2007
While in the Army
in Germany, I got
knocked out while
fighting over a girl.
My best friend Ronnie
Leroy rescued me from
an emminent slaughter.




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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2007-04-21 05:21 AM


LOL

thanks for the giggle James

I needed it

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
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2 posted 2007-04-21 06:44 AM


very cute!
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-04-21 12:03 PM


what a "beautiful" story to tell your grandchildren someday.
You shall fish girl from the ocean, not in the market.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-04-21 09:05 PM


Thank you passing shadows, paullallady and Drauntz for the nice responses...
Ronnie was my best friend until his wife came over to Germany and they moved off base...after that he spent more time with his wife and less time running around with me...he was a farm boy from Missouri...James

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