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Archea
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since 2006-05-13
Posts 65
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0 posted 2007-04-20 10:38 PM



I lost myself in days of rest,
The gleeming shift from night to day.
In bows and tangles softly lay
the snow and white, it made to jest.

I woke in torment of my dreams,
The cold caressed me silently.
i shook and shivered violently
and lost my very soul it seems.

The dreams came back then, vividly,
i saw her face in frozen prose.
i cried that day, or so it goes
the snow fell hard, most lividly.

In days of rest i lost my heart
In nights of wondering who thou art.
I lost my thoughts in thinking who,
I gained much more, in pursuing you.

I saw your face in frozen prose,
I need you now, it really shows...

I see the rain, but am i a part of it?

© Copyright 2007 Lonny Widdison - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-21 12:12 PM


what a nightmare! and to relate it to reality is scarier. oh, dream can not be all that good!


enjoyed.

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