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Open Poetry #40

The Scent of You

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2007-04-20 09:29 PM

The Scent of You

Stole words from you,
screamed them silently,
whispered them just loud enough
for you to hear,
between breaths;
followed them with kisses
to places led by hands of fire;
breathed the scent of you . . .
the scent of you . . .and me –
in love.

© wesley james beard, jr.
april 2007

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-04-20 10:02 PM

very effective, emotive 'write'!

much applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-04-21 03:16 AM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-21 05:27 AM

it's a scent that they cannot bottle

very passionate writing!

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

4 posted 2007-04-21 06:43 AM

the imagery portrayed, the emotions, wow, this is a beautiful piece of writing.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-21 12:05 PM

sooooo good a poem of love. beautiful.

enjoyed.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-04-21 01:08 PM

JWesley~

*sigh*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2007-04-21 02:05 PM

ohhh Jimmy.....sigh IS the word for this....

sigh

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