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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Wouldn’t it be odd If we shared a bed Together Would it bother you If after all I snored Time is not kind To poetic dreams And limbs must know Their age Still I imagine Given a moment or two Gazing into Those eyes of yours I could manage To meet the urge . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"It was not bad poetry. It was intimidating," |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...I loved this! Eric |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Eric, Thank you It is really a pleasure when someone before unknown responds I found this among my things and have no idea from what moment it came from Still I thought it worthwhile to show Thanks again John . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is outstanding very passionate! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Would it bother you If after all I snored Time is not kind To poetic dreams And limbs must know Their age But that aging (hopefully! *G*) brings maturity with it which has a grace of its own... and if a lover has known lonely, that snore might be embraced, not merely endured. *S* From whatever moment this came, I'm glad it was found and shared... I love it! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
i admire this poem of admiration with a slight hint of lust...romantic in its breadth....... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write'! [I really cannot 'improve' on the many apppropriate comments alread made] Applause! |
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