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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-04-20 12:18 PM



The time that
Has woven the strings
And attached its
Wings to the Appalachin Mountains.

There is a
Difference between
The lights that light
The skies reality
And the ones
That is seen beneath our breaths.

For if we should be so lucky
To dance with love
And meet our time
To sign the skies skyline
That our breaths shake
Each others words,
That will be life’s signature.

The love of a million miles
Where words pause mid flight
Just as eyes take the time
To surrender each other’s heart
For one last time.

A time woven around
The arrows that transcend
From Venus to the streets
We walk on.

© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-20 12:19 PM


very touching. beautiful!!!!
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-04-20 12:35 PM


I started highlighting, and each sentence I wrote, enchanted me more then the first....enjoyed the characture of this...the sound of gentleness, with it's unique echo of life
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