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OriginalNYGuy Junior Member
since 2007-04-14
Posts 14Texas,US |
The glass will break, the leaves I rake, The life you live is always fake. Uncover sadness, extinguish faces, brought to you, by times you faced this. Life's so hard but no one knows, How life can stop, and life can go. Balance in motion and spinning in time, The world we know, and life so fine. I want to run along the beach, I wish it was within my reach. I need some time, to find myself, I'm not the same, this heart needs help. Rewind my past to find out why, I act this way, and don't like lies. So many thoughts in mind for me, The anger grows, and someone bleeds. I broke apart and let it show, My past, My present, the things i know. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you just wrote the exact way I feel but my muse won't let me say it like this I do enjoy reading you! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
exceptionally good writing!!!! |
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