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OriginalNYGuy
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since 2007-04-14
Posts 14
Texas,US

0 posted 2007-04-20 10:53 AM


Beleive this, Trust me
Im here on just one knee

Its funny how the world can change
and blow like the trees
Or flow like the breeze
Its simple but too much like a tease

Ill keep my head up
Just forget about the negative things
Praying hard cuz i gotta keep the positive in me

This vibe that i keep
Molds me like a gingerbread man
At night when i sleep
I'm thinking of my life in his hands

I know you here me
But who am I

The voice of a single guy
A heart that stays free from lies
A life that can never die

© Copyright 2007 Paul Iudica - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2007-04-20 10:56 AM


Paul, this is a wonderful poem and touched me when I think I needed it most

days have been hard for me you know

thanks for the upbeat write!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-04-20 11:58 AM


"A heart that stays free from lies
A life that can never die"  

Amen to that, Faithful One.

A very moving, prayerful piece of baring-your- soul writing.

Love & God's Light,
EA



Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-20 12:14 PM


beautiful, powerful and masculine.

very good.

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