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My darkness within
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My darkness within |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
I sit in the dark not knowing where to go I see a light so far away This darkness is taking me too deep This light I see, seem so far away Is it hope, for another tomorrow Is it the savior of my soul Is it my soulmate, waiting till I come out Can it be you my love Reaching in, to get me out I can not tell, It is so dark. I sit here in the dark, waiting Loosing grasp of time and place loosing self and all control My mind confused For I can not see before me.. sending me deeper intoa void Why the darkness When all I saw was my freedom,toward the light I got sucked in again I cannot stay in the dark again I fought too hard to get away I must be strong Moving against a current Slowly toward that light Advancing 3 step forward and falling 1 behind I can not fall behind I must not let darkness win I must believe.. the light is waiting, just for me I must believe the balance comes, from within me Holding on to that light will bring me back from the dark In your darkness, I see my light In my light , you see your darkness creating an equal balance... between love and hate Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very true. beautiful poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I know that balance for sure and have gotten stuck there many times |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is interesting!: "In your darkness, I see my light In my light , you see your darkness creating an equal balance... between love and hate" |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
creative piece you have written, i enjoyed it. |
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