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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-04-20 08:50 AM


Words

Silent whirling’s won to ground
Words like leaves spun round and round
Falling like the death of birth
To rest upon the face of earth

Only echoes flying air
Carried whispers of my care
Playing phantoms of the swoon
Underneath a bright new noon

With the passing of the leaves
Passes fantasies naïve
Circling eternity
Those passions of fraternity

My soul has sown the chaos theme
Into garments of a dream
And I have left a breath of air
To ever whisper that I care

So with each new that stays to breathe
Plays the essence of believe


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-04-20 08:55 AM


Beautiful...


Hey, you just reminded me, know what I saw last night on the news?  No you don't, so I think I won't tell you...hehe just kidding.

Sy...I never knew there were crocodiles in Florida....but they reported that after much scientific consentration on habitat, they have come back to thrive.  One perfect environment for them is somewhere down there in rivers and streams around a nuclear plant?  

Ya Learn somethin every day.  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-04-20 09:37 AM


LeeJ
I'm afraid if the nuclear plant goes so do we. I'm about thirty miles away but that's not far enought. The top of the morning to ya.

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-20 10:27 AM


Words  
'Silent whirling’s won to ground'

'Only echoes flying air'

How true! and beautiful.

Sir I am still think about that "color fusses into white"

color can mean beauty  also can be chaos in graffiti and many
white means, pure, simple, clean, dull, Holy, and many others.

trully love to read your poems.

have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-04-20 10:33 AM


Drauntz
I enjoy your comments and thank you for the read.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-04-20 11:24 AM


yes, I suppose everything passes

enjoyed this, especially the last two lines which you always do so well

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-04-20 11:32 AM


passing,
Thank you sweetie I appreciate the comment.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-04-20 12:03 PM


Good morning, Sir Sonneteer!

No one can swirl and twirl a word better than you can!

As per usual, I enjoyed this morning's poetic offering!

Keep on talking ~ and writing!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-04-20 02:34 PM


Earth Angel
Thank you Angel,

The Lady
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9 posted 2007-04-21 02:42 PM




"Underneath a bright new noon"

awesome Sir Sy

ivordavies
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10 posted 2007-04-21 02:53 PM


Seymour,

"My soul has sown the chaos theme
Into garments of a dream
And I have left a breath of air
To ever whisper that I care"

Your words have sown the seeds of dreams
with knowledge bursting at the seams,
so all may pluck them from the air
natured by all your loving care...

Ivor

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2007-04-21 03:44 PM


Lady
Thank you


Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-04-21 03:45 PM


ivordavies
Thank you, Enjoyed your addition.

paullallady
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13 posted 2007-04-21 07:23 PM


beautiful words, woven together.  I loved the flow and rhythm of this.  
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2007-04-21 08:25 PM


paullallady
Thank you for the read and comment.

Startime55
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15 posted 2007-04-22 12:11 PM


Your words are music to my ears...a wonderful time was had by me as I danced to the vision of your words...BRAVO!!!*Big Hugs*
TinaTrivett
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16 posted 2007-04-22 12:13 PM


Loved it Seymour. Lovely as always.
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2007-04-22 08:53 AM


Startime55
Thank you for the Bravo.

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2007-04-22 08:54 AM


Thank you Tina.
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