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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-04-19 09:29 PM



Trust so hard to come by
Love so difficult to hold
Hearts so easily broken
Words said without meaning

Its confusing at times
Can this be true?
Is it just a game?
Can I believe?
Do hearts lie?
Are these the questions we all ask?

Sweet words
Are always said
bringing tears of joy
Is believing in them
going to hurt one day?
How to trust that all is
as the heart feels
and as the words say..

New feelings
Fears never felt before
Emotions misunderstood


A need to express
no one to listen
No one to trust
Always so willing to give,
so selfless
Yet the surroundings so selfish
Blinded by self satisfaction
Not noticing
the true emotions
that lie within....

These feelings
Can they be controlled
organized
put into prespective?
So that they are not misunderstood
Are they present from lack of trust
or simply because they've never been felt
Don't have the answers
Guidence is needed
no one to give it

12/06/06


Jen--->MindBodySoul

© Copyright 2007 Jeannette Urrego - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-04-19 10:14 PM


I like this...James
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-04-20 01:23 AM


true! very emotional.
Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180

3 posted 2007-04-20 08:56 AM


Wow, I love the way that confusion and doubt comes across in this.
It's very thought-provoking

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