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Rottiestyl
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0 posted 2007-04-19 07:20 PM


It shuts down my creative juices
When I have to admit I am wrong.
Which just about never happens,
I might add.

No.

Not admitting I’m wrong, that I am wrong at all.
Now, now, you can not accuse me of conceit-ability,
That is a made up word and it implies that I have the
Ability to think I am better than most.

Even is that were true. . .

The being better than most, would only have to defended
If another were jealous. You see?
Which is the bigger monster? Jealousy or a little old
Fashioned and character building conceit?

I am not defending my bad traits.
I am not even agreeing that I have any.
It is presumptuous of you to imply such a thing.
There you go.

Conceit means presumptuous.

It would seem your target has caused a ricochet.
An abrupt turn on top of your big toe, friend.
Hurts like hell doesn’t it?
Not that I would know.

Ah yes, the juices are still flowing.


By: K. Mulroney
04-19-2007
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© Copyright 2007 K. Mulroney - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-04-19 11:13 PM


Welcome to these blue pages.
BTW, Rotties are cool!

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-04-20 01:16 AM


very good. smooth.
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3 posted 2007-04-20 08:35 AM



Enjoying the thought process of the
internal questioning...and the proposed
answer.  Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-04-20 08:51 AM




would love to give this to my boss...

well done...bravo!!!!!!

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