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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2007-04-18 09:26 PM




Again and again one is born,
And again and again one dies,
And again and again one sleeps in the mother’s womb…
      ~ Adi Sankara

48 days ago great grandfather freed his last breath
into Chinese air  
today a small boy fish  
slithered  
swam from his mother
mouth open in American air  
gasping  
reaching
for that last Chinese breath
inhaling hard

hands
wrinkled by age
clutched at glorious wisdom

red and gold dragons gathered
wings beating
whispered blessings
kissed an old smooth cheek

what is the turn around  
on this time line

the boy fixed me with black filmed eyes    
communion    
with his ancestor    

pink mouth blew love bubbles
from great grandfather

delivered here
48 days later

by this small boy fish
_____

Baby Boy Fan does not yet have a name and is being called Bao Bao... Chinese for baby.


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-04-18 09:34 PM


Nice writing...james
MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2007-04-18 09:44 PM


A glorious blessing and joy
fulfilled with this new baby boy
a gift full of grace from above
abide everlasting with love

Much happiness and congratulations to family, Kate.

         MoonShadow
.

Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-18 10:20 PM


a cutie,
a  little Sun
great wishes
we kiss upon
pray  my heart
be like him
innocent
and young
If I can’t be reborn.

I am very happy for you
May mother and baby be all healthy and strong.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2007-04-18 11:41 PM


sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2007-04-19 10:30 PM



thank you James  

thank you so much Kenneth  

thank you Drauntz  
all is well

thank you Helen

Bao Bao’s name is Joshua Baoluo (Paul) Fan

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