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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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0 posted 2007-06-03 08:10 PM


Hi to all my pip friends. it's been a while since i last posted, and i've missed you all.
i hope i can start posting often again.

here we go,

The Forgotten Night

I'm walking
alone trough this cold night
through this cold streets

the moon is not
where it should be
she refused to shine tonight
the stars aren't there either
they have refused to shine too

and the people said today
that the sun didn't rise
and they think it won't be rising for a while

the forgotten night
full of mystery
the forgotten night
even the time forgot to pass by

i decided to take a walk
a long long lonely walk
just to search
for the moon and the stars
and tell them to shine again
and if i were to find the time along my walk
i'll tell him to keep passing by

for me, this forgotten night is important
on a night like this
same date
years ago
you decided to leave
taking my moon away
my stars
and even the time
along with my heart
and left me walking
on an endless forgotten night.

© Copyright 2007 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-06-03 08:39 PM


Denis~
Nice to see you found your way back to our little poetic circle~

Melancholy little render ... tender~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2007-06-03 09:10 PM


welcome back!
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-06-04 02:03 AM


wow, this is a beautiful and romantic and a pure heart--poem.

enjoyed at night.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-06-04 04:28 AM


No one wants to lose someone they want to love and care for...James
Neeraja
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5 posted 2007-06-04 09:56 AM


Great comeback!!!
Jenna
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6 posted 2007-06-04 12:50 PM


Wow!!! This was amazing. I could feel every word.

Much applause!

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