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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-04-18 01:00 PM


                    Wonder
               Silent thunder
          Light grips liquid mountain
        Tear perches on purple fountain
      Rainbow scatters into color feathers
           Ocean tailors yonder heather
          Wind weeps through mourning air
               Piercing whisper
                   Wonder

For them

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1 posted 2007-04-18 02:12 PM


this is beautiful!!
Margherita
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2 posted 2007-04-18 06:57 PM


Challenge beautifully met!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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3 posted 2007-04-18 07:56 PM


A beautiful remembrance.
Thank you very much!

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2007-04-18 08:02 PM


Fine write!

Thanks for taking up the 'challenge'!

Applause!!

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5 posted 2007-04-18 10:39 PM


"Rainbow scatters into color feathers"
Good to see you do the challenge. This is nice!

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6 posted 2007-04-19 07:29 AM


Drauntz~

~Thoughtful
Penning the thoughts
Helping us to remember
The events that movingly touch
The very heart and soul of our country
Coming together in our thoughts
Holding others in prayer
Vigil is kept
Thoughtful~

Thank you for joining the challenge so eloquently~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2007-04-19 08:18 AM


Bravo! Wonder-full! Very well done!


EA

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8 posted 2007-04-19 02:07 PM


  Love it! .......jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (04-20-2007 08:24 PM).]

Rottiestyl
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9 posted 2007-04-20 07:26 AM


A flowing beauty.

  

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2007-04-21 09:20 PM


Enjoyed...James
Startime55
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11 posted 2007-04-22 01:04 AM


I love thunder storms so this poem came alive for me...Wonderful visions were born...thank you...*Big Hugs*
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