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Her Heart Touches
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Her Heart Touches |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Her Heart Touches I feel wanted and needed, I feel captured and free, everytime my sweetheart kisses me. "Once a woman whispered some words softly into my ear, and they were exactly the words that my ear had a wish to hear." The night we first met she touched my arm while her mouth told me how much she liked me. Sensations of touch of smell and of feel, her heart touches are so sensually real. JamesLee 17April 2007 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I especially liked: "I feel wanted and needed, I feel captured and free, everytime my sweetheart kisses me." The following line is especially grand!: "I feel captured and free," Applause! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful love poem. enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is very romantic and beautiful. Yes, it just works this way, I know. Love, Margherita  |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
beautiful write! I have been touched! Thank you for sharing. Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah James, heart touches are so special....  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
secondhanddreampoet chose my favorite lines James excellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very lovely and romantic James!  ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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