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just this once....again

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SEA
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0 posted 04-17-2007 06:34 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


I stopped the world then,
took the moment in
and my heart remembered when….
just this once, again




It’s not always easy
loving you like I do
some days the emotions
spill over
drenching the hours in
.....you.....

I wade through memories
as so many times before
pausing along the way
reminiscing and quietly
wishing the future will hold
more.


~SEA~
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1 posted 04-17-2007 06:38 PM       View Profile for BlueEyes   Email BlueEyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BlueEyes

Beautiful....
jwesley
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2 posted 04-17-2007 06:39 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

If love was ever spelled out on paper...this is it my friend....terrific write...it was YOUR pen spelling the word...so it's only as pretty as I knew it would be...

jwesley
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3 posted 04-17-2007 06:47 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

simply beautiful. and the picture too.

thank you for the sharing.
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4 posted 04-17-2007 07:20 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

So gentle and beautiful Susan~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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SEA~
And you know ... how I feel about this beauty~

The heart remembers when~

Thank you for the beauty of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 04-17-2007 08:08 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

fine romantic 'write'....

I particularly loved:

"I stopped the world then,
took the moment in
and my heart remembered when...
just this once, again"

Applause!
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Lovely...James
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SEA...Tender romantic words. A pleasure to read you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
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9 posted 04-17-2007 11:09 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Absolutely lovely Sea.  I know a certain Mother Moth is going to love that poem and photo, so will make sure she gets it.
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10 posted 04-18-2007 02:08 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Beautiful and lovingly expressed with such tenderness

Hope
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this made me want something... quite intense actually
a beautiful write indeed.

*tips hat off to you*
~Cheye
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12 posted 04-18-2007 02:56 AM       View Profile for Savvy   Email Savvy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Savvy

Sea,

I've never myself felt quite the degree of love that this poem envoked on my heart. I know I am young and I hope someday I can feel just a sliver of what I just felt while reading this about another person. I was moved to heart tears. Beautifully penned and beautifully displayed.
Thank You,
Kel

Speak only well of others, and need not whisper. -Unknown

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just say hello tomorrow and the firture opens the doors!!!! take care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

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romance with you drips
then you turn it on
to full blown drench
love it

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A wonderful, romantic write. Enjoyed.

Andrew
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just like looking in the mirror

beautiful write
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17 posted 04-18-2007 12:49 PM       View Profile for paullallady   Email paullallady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paullallady

I loved the wording, this is beautiful.
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(angel friendship hugs) Oh Susan, this is such a selfless and emotive write, dearest friend, it made me tear up as simply imagining being placed in that sort of pensive, sensitive place, wishing what could be, can get you overemotional! (sigh) Bless you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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oh how I adore reading you, as your insightful words, pictures and insight remind me of times I've experienced.

Good reading you Sea.  Thank you
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20 posted 04-18-2007 07:27 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Elegant and captivating words of longing, beautifully presented.

Love,
Margherita
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you guys are so nice! Thank you very much for your kind replies.
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22 posted 04-19-2007 12:47 PM       View Profile for MindBodySoul   Email MindBodySoul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MindBodySoul

I have to say... that felt every word... it touched a very sensitive part of me.  

Love is that powerful and beautiful...and it sometimes makes the world stand still, with the memories or with just the feeling.

Thank you for sharing your inner beauty

  



Jen--->MindBodySoul
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that was such a sweet reply, thank you so much
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24 posted 04-20-2007 04:39 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

"I wade through memories
as so many times before
pausing along the way
reminiscing and quietly
wishing the future will hold
more."

YEP!
Great write.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

 
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